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Apr 19, 2015
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starstarstarstar 		easy essay
by: Mudhir

really it is good paragraphs and easy to understand
Apr 21, 2015
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starstarstar 		good essay - Reducing the Working Week Essay
by: Anonymous

Your essay is grammatically very good. But there is no linking sentences between the paragraphs. Also you had concluded the essay in the second paragraph which should not be done.

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