u did some spelling mistakes.. when u read it again hope u will find..
Dec 06, 2015 Rating
bands by: Anonymous
7 but correct spelling mistakes
Dec 08, 2015 Rating
Band 4-5 by: Anonymous
Yup have a lot of mistakes. Grammar and sentence structure is broken and impedes the meaning. Paragraphs are uses well, however there is lack of progression and discourse markers are used incorrectly or absent. Lastly, a lot of spelling mistakes.